I loved this - thanks so much for writing it for me! Loved the dead Shannon dialogue (I'm actually considering something myself where Boone ends up as one of the Oceanic Six and Hurley tries to pass on messages from Shannon, haven't quite worked it all out yet though!)
:) Thank you sooo much I was ridiculously worried about this. I've never written anything with these two before (my only forays into the Lost fandom have all been Jack/Shannon oriented, I know, I'm weird) so I wasn't exactly sure how this was going to work out. It was fun trying something new, I hope the little bit of Shoone thrown into the mix was alright. I know you didn't really specify one way or another how you felt about that but I just can't imagine these two without it. I'm really glad you enjoyed this, thanks so much for commenting!
The motion of her body as it falls to the ground is finally enough to spur him into action. He’s spent most of his life trying to catch her as she falls, with her fighting him tooth and nail every step of the way. [...] I think that has to be my favourite paragraph. It's so very much them.
Thank you very much! This was my first attempt at writing these two so I wasn't really sure if anyone else saw them the same way I do. I'm really glad you enjoyed this, thank you so much for commenting!
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And that last section totally made me cry!
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The motion of her body as it falls to the ground is finally enough to spur him into action. He’s spent most of his life trying to catch her as she falls, with her fighting him tooth and nail every step of the way. [...]
I think that has to be my favourite paragraph. It's so very much them.
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This was really neat - I quite liked the take you did with this, with Dead Shannon and angsty Boone. Well done!
~Red
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Yes! Jack/Shannon is such an interesting idea to me. And Boone/Shannon - GUH. They're just so angsty and complicated, I LOVE it. :D
~Red
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