Yay, I was a good gryphon today, and spent an hour or two on an edit pass over the first two or three chaptes of The BlackThe little writing group I'm in had some good feedback that I hope I've managed to work in, in terms of setting up a little more tension early. I refused to start with a fight scene, because GAWD I'm tired of that. The whole "
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