Why on earth were you hesitant to post this?! It's pure genius!!
The scene with them both commenting on each other's hair and appearance had me laughing out loud! Woot! It didn't seem that OC to me--I could *so* imagine them saying these things.
Thank you for a very encouraging comment! Glad to hear you found it amusing, that was what I was going for.
I suppose the reason why I was/am hesitant about it is because my only other HnG fic is a very long and would-be realistic take on how Touya and Shindou might get together, so I worried that the people who enjoyed that would be disappointed by this short, cracky silliness. ^^
ahahaha, that's really nicely done comedically, and i love the idea of ogata fixing up their fashion and fixing THEM up at the same time. you gotta watch that slimy old guy, never know what he's up to! ^_~
*g* Yeah, Ogata would definitely feel smug about that! ^^
Thank you! I'm glad it entertained you. And my comedy seems to be mostly spent while RPing; I tend to RP crack characters, so it's quite rare that it comes through in fic writing.
I just saw this, and it's really funny. Love the way Hikaru and Akira shout at each other, this time over how good the other look. Hee. (Though I shudder at Akira with a crew cut.)
I really don't like the idea of Akira with a crew cut, either, to be honest. The plot bunny was inspired by the fact that a friend of mine doesn't like Akira's canon haircut, and insisted he should be shorn. It sort of went from there. :-P
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The scene with them both commenting on each other's hair and appearance had me laughing out loud! Woot! It didn't seem that OC to me--I could *so* imagine them saying these things.
Thanks for the yawsome read!
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I suppose the reason why I was/am hesitant about it is because my only other HnG fic is a very long and would-be realistic take on how Touya and Shindou might get together, so I worried that the people who enjoyed that would be disappointed by this short, cracky silliness. ^^
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thankyou!
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Thanks for commenting, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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He would be pleased by this, I think, smarmy bat that he is.
Very entertaining read, I like all the snarky, hilarious lines. ^_^ Do you write comedy often?
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Thank you! I'm glad it entertained you. And my comedy seems to be mostly spent while RPing; I tend to RP crack characters, so it's quite rare that it comes through in fic writing.
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Also MMMMM OGATA.
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Did Ogata work for you?
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Mmmmm yes.
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Oooh. *is proud* I wasn't sure I got his characterisation right. Partly because I really don't get what makes him tick, in canon.
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poor both of them with theri hair dress mess and so in love
i really really love it!!!
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Thanks for posting this!
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Glad you enjoyed it! ^^
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