Rain, If You Really Think About It, Is Hilarious

[stirlingbennett]

Sometimes I get mildly irritated when people complain about rainy days and call them 'dreary.' And then I think, that's probably how people feel about me always making faces at the sun and wishing audibly for some clouds. Some saturated clouds

Comments

[robinellen]

I love rewriting...I take all the comments from my critiquers, print them out, and then go through each chapter with those by my side, changing everything they suggest which I agree needs changing, and explaining the rest with more clarity...yep, revision is my kind of thing. I hope you enjoy it! :)

[stirlingbennett]

Oooh, good call! I forgot about critiquers' comments! *starts hunting for old emails and pages*

Thanks!