Fic: step on the sparks

Aug 16, 2010 22:25

Title: step on the sparks
Author: Mary (stillxmyxheart)
Beta: Lindsay (nylana)
Rating: Adult
Genre: Angst, Smut
Word Count: 1,005
Characters: Rose/Nine
Disclaimer: Anything you recognize? Ain't mine.
Summary: He that is not jealous is not in love.

A/N: Written for Challenge 47 at then_theres_us; title comes from "Firecracker" by Lisa Loeb and summary is a quote attributed to Saint ( Read more... )

fic: pairing: rose tyler/nine, fic: doctor who, fic: all fic, fic: challenge fic

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ms_sardonicus August 17 2010, 03:25:13 UTC
Guh! I'm loving all this Nine fic. There's still not enough of it but when it's done right (like this one)....it's just wonderful! Hot, steamy, jealous and possessive Nine....is my favorite and he's stellar here. Absolutely love this: The hurt mixes with her anger, and he can feel the charge building around her; she seems to crackle with it and he thinks he can see the sparks flying from her eyes and the ends of her hair, accumulating between them on the floor. Unable to stand the tension any longer he moves forward, closing the gap between them, stepping on the sparks, and his lips crash against hers, his fingers diving into her hair.

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stillxmyxheart August 17 2010, 03:29:31 UTC
Oh, gosh, thank you so, so much! There definitely isn't enough Nine fic in the world, so I'm always glad to add my meager contributions XD

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honorh August 17 2010, 03:51:45 UTC
I agree with the previous comment--more Nine!fic is always good, especially when it's as steamy-hot as this! That was definitely GUH-worthy.

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stillxmyxheart August 17 2010, 03:52:52 UTC
Thank you so much! ♥

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debs7 August 17 2010, 04:35:15 UTC
This. This is just fantastic.

Hot. Sweet and awesome.

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stillxmyxheart August 17 2010, 04:38:04 UTC
Oh, thank you so much!

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bacon_fiend August 17 2010, 05:03:01 UTC
That was wonderful. Dear Nine needs more attention. :P

I absolutely adore the way you capture them; it's so in keeping with character it wouldn't surprise me to have this happen between episodes. Well done! :D

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stillxmyxheart August 17 2010, 05:16:33 UTC
He really really does *squishes him*

Gosh, that's one of the best compliments I can receive, thank you so much!

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klingonlady August 17 2010, 05:53:49 UTC
Oh boy... we talked about how I always had more then just one word for your fics.. GUH and UNF = 2 words.. But I fear you won't be happy with that either..

Jealous 9 is REALLY HOT!! I like this part the best

His hand slides across the sheets, finding her arm and following it to her hand. He weaves his fingers through hers and raises himself up to kiss her lips.

"I will always want you," he whispers.

"Always?" she asks, and he thinks her eyes glow golden for a moment.

"Always."

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stillxmyxheart August 17 2010, 05:57:46 UTC
ILU, BB XD Thank you! <3

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