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Fic: suspended in summer

Aug 03, 2010 03:16

Title: suspended in summer
Author: Mary (stillxmyxheart)
Beta: Lindsay (nylana)
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Fluff, Romance
Word Count: 1,043
Characters: Rose/Ten
Disclaimer: Anything you recognize? Ain't mine.
Summary: Rose and Ten spend a relaxing summer day in Florida.

A/N: Written for Challenge 45, "Countries", at then_theres_us :D Lame summary is lame, wut.

( The air is warm and feels thick and slightly damp; he tells her this is typical for north Florida in August, and she scowls as she lifts her hair off her neck. )

fic: doctor who, fic: pairing: rose tyler/ten, fic: all fic, fic: challenge fic

Comments 8

happyfew August 3 2010, 11:41:49 UTC

NEGL, I FLAILED AND SCREAMED WHEN I SAW YOU'D WRITTEN T/R. IT MAKES MY DAY, EVERY SINGLE TIME.

OH BB, THIS WAS DELICIOUS, SERIOUSLY GORGEOUS. I MAY BE SLIGHTLY DEAD.

He can hear the rapid beat of her heart, can almost smell the adrenaline running through her veins, and he breathes deeply as his lips pass over her jaw, inhaling the scent of her sun-warmed skin. YOU HAVE TO PUT THESE SENTENCES IN DON'T YOU, THAT ARE JUST STUNNING STUNNING STUNNING? NOT THAT I'M COMPLAINING.

Their legs tangle together as they tread the water, and her arms tighten around his neck as she pulls herself closer to him. His pout turns into a grin as he captures her lips, his fingers slipping beneath the waist of her bikini bottoms and pressing against her flesh. He somehow manages to pull her even closer and her body presses along the length of his, her breasts against his chest, her belly flush with his. HNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNGNNNNNNNNNGH. So hot, OMGOSH. I love the Ten/Rose fics that are established, and especially when you write them, because the cute ( ... )

stillxmyxheart August 3 2010, 15:41:31 UTC

YOUR COMMENTS ALWAYS MAKE MY DAY, WIFEY. THANK YOU SO MUCH <3

develish1 August 3 2010, 18:10:32 UTC

ooh, nice. Although now I have a head full of pictures of what happens next. I think I need another shower...

stillxmyxheart August 3 2010, 18:11:06 UTC

Hee! Thank you! XD

julesndairyland August 4 2010, 03:27:19 UTC

<----- Hurray!

Lovely story and great images.

stillxmyxheart August 4 2010, 03:28:49 UTC

Thank you! <3

emraldeyedauter August 5 2010, 22:25:01 UTC

mmm Lovely. I've got a stack of stuff to do today and not looking forward to any of it but this certainly makes me feel good so I just may be able to tackle it all.

stillxmyxheart August 5 2010, 22:32:32 UTC

Aww, yay, fic as a motivator XD I'm glad you liked it, bb, thank you! <3