Foam on her skin

[mia_chan]

titel: Foam on her skin
autor:mia_chan/stille_momente
fandom: Harry Potter
character: Hermione / Pansy
theme: bathroom
Word-count: 782
language: !E - N - G - L - I - S - H!
Ratings: light R?
warnings: femmeslash
beta: by WONDERFUL original_lie
Disclaimer: not mine. all JKR´s.no money. just for fun
A/N 1: for original_lie
A/N 1: I don't write much in english, so I'm sorry for the lack of

Comments

[pit_chick666]

Never had been able to tear herself from those eyes, which seemed to make love to her with just a look.

i totally know how that feels, and you should write in english more often
:D

[mia_chan]

really ^_~ that's definitly positiv!

THANK YOU, I would like to write more but always badly needing a good beta as a non native speaker you also need someone who is willing to correct all these tiny mistakes you make T_T

but thank you for encourage me!

[severusslave_76]

This was very good - the plot was lovely. I do have to agree - you do need a beta. Having said that, i am willing to volunteer to be yours.

[mia_chan]

^_~ really you liked it *happy*

I will LOVE YOU if you beta it, just go ahead and mess with it! my mail is rose-magnifique@gmx.de

[yaminokurisu]

But she wanted to be marked. She intended to be belong to this girl who would never call her by her first name.

Ah, that's just an example of the beauty of your work. Great stuff girl :D

[mia_chan]

THANK YOU! I'm so happy that you like it!

[lenija]

Wunderschönes Szenario, dichte Atmosphäre, und oh, Deine Formulierungen (das Pairing liebe ich sowieso).
Mag sein, daß Du Fehler machst beim englischen Schreiben, aber Du scheinst trotzdem genau ausdrücken zu können, was Du ausdrücken willst, und ich finde, das ist einer der schönsten Texte, die ich bisher von Dir gelesen habe. (Das will übrigens was heißen).
Kann ich ein bißchen was von Deinem Talent abbekommen? ;) (Und von Deinem Mut? Ich trau mich nie, englische Texte ins Netz zu stellen).

[mia_chan]

T_T

darf ich dich küssen? Bitte?

Danke Maus T_T wieso heul ich jetzt....

Ich war so unsicher, so furchtbar unsicher, und Mel meinte ich solls mal versuchen T_T

Danke DANKE DANKE!!!

wie Talent? ICH? WO?
*etwss von ihrem verkümmerten Mut rüberschiebt*

[pervy_fairy]

Great job on this, love. Honestly. ♥
I loved Pansy... beautiful. She's one of my favorite characters.

*smirks*
SEQUEL, please???

*smooches*

[mia_chan]

*peeks around the corner* you do my girl?
honestly? really? it is... not that bad?

I'm always so unsure about my english writings...
>.<

OMG A SEQUEL??? for Pansy?

You know you asked for the bloody part *hahahahahhahaa* *scares her fluffly girl*