My first Harry Potter fic

Jul 15, 2006 21:42


Here be Dragons
Four birthdays, four glimpses.

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When he was four, Harry found a knight in the garden.

Cautiously, remembering the lessons Aunt Petunia had smacked into him, he straightened his shoulders, dipped his head and held out his hand.

‘Please, Sir Knight, will you do me the honour of visiting my cupboard?’ he whispered.

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ex_ella_bane358 July 25 2006, 14:42:41 UTC
This is just lovely. Thank you for sharing it!

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stillaseeker July 25 2006, 15:25:12 UTC
Aw thanks! I love your work, so your feedback is doubly appreciated!

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mizbean July 25 2006, 20:49:17 UTC
Your first Harry Potter fic was quite lovely. I really like quiet tone of this piece. Nice work:-)

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stillaseeker July 25 2006, 22:27:46 UTC
Thanks for the feedback!! I do like to think of Harry as being quite quiet - I think it's an aspect of his personality that's sometimes overlooked=)

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cutecoati July 25 2006, 21:10:53 UTC
Very beautiful! The four scenes are lovely, and so much backstory you only hint at, yet it's there. I especially liked your characterisation of Hagrid and ickle Harry's reaction to him. Great work!

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stillaseeker July 25 2006, 22:32:15 UTC
Thanks for the wonderful feedback! Lol I have a weakness for ickle Harry, and I'm so glad the story didn't come across as horribly obscure!

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roastchicken July 26 2006, 22:37:34 UTC
LOL, I love your icon!

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lily_firebolt July 25 2006, 23:53:11 UTC
AWW!!! It's so sweet! I specially liked the ay you used Hogwarts' motto. I think that's what JK Rowling meant to do all along!

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stillaseeker July 26 2006, 08:23:57 UTC
Ahaha yes I'm sure this is what JK intended! I'm so glad you liked this little story (and I adore snape's expression in your icon!)

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lily_firebolt July 26 2006, 15:06:35 UTC
I figure this would be Snape's perma-expression where Harry/Draco is concerned!

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mordyn4 July 26 2006, 05:28:19 UTC
Ah, I love this to bits and bits and bits! Excellent characterisation and sweet, and poignant, and just precious. M.

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stillaseeker July 26 2006, 08:25:05 UTC
Thanks for the lovely, lovely feedback!

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