Clanging and other late night sounds that exist only in my head

[stillaseeker]

I'm, like, so productive.

*brandishes new fic*

*cackles*

After the war, Draco packed his bags.

He took one last short walk around the Manor, avoiding the soot-darkened wall where Aunt Bella had cast Incendio, the barrenness of the floors where blood-streaked Bokharan carpets had been removed, and the garden where nothing would grow again.

He looked,

Comments

[haltlos]

If Lupin started twinkling like Dumbledore, someone would have to pay.
*muuaahahaa* One of the best lines ever.

Draco felt disoriented.
I loved that line because you wrote the different places and their constant feeling to be put of place so well.
Wonderful story - I always like stories where characters leave home for some time to cope with their past/themselves/... :)

[stillaseeker]

Haha thanks for the lovely feedback! I'm glad you liked, and that it all came together in spite of all the country-hopping. Never been to America, by the way, but there you are! *glomps*

[megyal]

Amazing. THere was a quite jittery thread running through the whole thing and then it all sort of melted into something confortable. I think it started at this line: Harry waited for the perfect moment, and skilfully flicked a sand crab onto Malfoy’s bare shoulder, making him shriek like a girl.

[stillaseeker]

Mmm thank you. I think you captured what I wanted the fic to feel like perfectly. Journeys end in lovers meeting, oui?

[tracy]

This was adorable, I loved the subtlety of it all and then all that playfulness in the end from Sev's POV. and the last line. *_*

[stillaseeker]

Yay! Thank you. It was my first time writing Severus POV, and he was... unexpectedly amusing. Hehe!

[kurla88]

:D That was excellent. Loved the last line.

[stillaseeker]

Haha! Thanks so much!!

[geoviki]

I very much like the structure and detail of this story. Nicely done!

[stillaseeker]

Eee thank you! Especially the comment about structure - *beams*