Comments | still_need_name: A short little fic

rhin_ariel in still_need_name

A short little fic

Jul 25, 2006 11:37

This was posted on my personal journal last night, and I'm now posting it here after getting some good responses to it. However, this is a slightly edited version with grammar and spelling mistakes dealt with and a few small additions. Like a title ( Read more... )

sparky fic

Comments 21

johnliz4ever July 25 2006, 11:01:03 UTC

You tricked me. I thought it was John. Great fic :)

Kissing in front of him was one thing, volunteering him to McKay for more than five minutes was quite another.

That is so true. And Funny.

rhin_ariel July 25 2006, 16:36:37 UTC

YAY! I acheieved my goal!

Thank you!

And it is so true! :P

vickysg1 July 25 2006, 11:23:49 UTC

I too thought it was John!

But Elizabeth and John's son --> yay!!

Cute fic!!

rhin_ariel July 25 2006, 16:37:08 UTC

Thank you!!

Right, 4 fooled, rest of the comments to go!

seramercury July 25 2006, 11:47:45 UTC

Too cute! You got me too! :D

rhin_ariel July 25 2006, 16:37:57 UTC

Thank you!!

5 fooled.

johnsheppardluv July 25 2006, 11:54:57 UTC

i too was tricked! & i demand payment for rendering emotional damage from you! :( really tho, this was such a cute fic! ;) i DO wonder what the tyke's first name is tho! is it John Jr. or Josh or Joe or wat???? *trundles away, pondering on this subject* ~Sharma ;)

rhin_ariel July 25 2006, 16:41:25 UTC

Thank you for reviewing!!

i demand payment for rendering emotional damage from you!

Well, you'll have a job, I is a poor broke student.

6 fooled

lightz474 July 25 2006, 12:44:44 UTC

Lol! Yup, I also thought it was John. Great fic. ;D

rhin_ariel July 25 2006, 16:42:12 UTC

Thank you!!

7 fooled.