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Fiction: Prompt 197 - Dinner

Nov 24, 2010 19:23

Title: Lazy Sunday Afternoon: Greed Kills

Author: gillo

Rating: PG at most

Word Count: 802

Prompt: 197 - Dinner

Characters/Pairing (if any): Spike/Buffy, with added Scoobies

A/N: Crossposted to sb_fag_ends as it fits their prompt too. (Funny, that.) This is is honour of a special meal I believe my US friends will be eating soon.

( Lazy Sunday Afternoon: Greed Kills )

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Comments 6

angelus2hot November 25 2010, 20:14:52 UTC

Awwww! Poor Buffy. The ex coming would make things a little crazy.

Beautifully done!

gillo November 25 2010, 21:18:52 UTC

Thank you!

katmarajade November 25 2010, 20:35:33 UTC

Oh, this is so completely lovely-- and perfect for today! I love the idea that Buffy goes on these stressed out cooking rampages often, as the glimpse we got of them was hilarious and a little scary. Dawn muttering about "butling" was hilarious. And Spike was beyond amazing. One even slightly wobbly lower lip and he was her slave. As always. He sighed and picked up the tiny bag of blood. "Otter in the wild rice it is, Buffy." Oh my goodness, I didn't know whether to laugh or cry. And I love how easily he can see through her and his easy way of bringing her back down. And the bit when Buffy freaks out because he doesn't know how to make a Yorkshire Pudding-- too funny. What a lovely Thanksgiving treat. :)

gillo November 25 2010, 21:20:09 UTC

What a lovely, detailed comment - thank you so much for this!

chic_c November 26 2010, 16:55:42 UTC

Buffy trying to impress her guests with culinary skills and Spike always ready to help: you painted a perfect picture of their home life.
Plus plans of leftovers fun, yay! *BG*

gillo November 26 2010, 17:32:27 UTC

Thank you - I'm pleased that you liked it!