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189 ficlet - The long-term benefits of Sunscreen

Sep 30, 2010 19:24

Title: The long-term benefits of Sunscreen
Author: deird1
Rating: PG
Word Count: 380
Prompt: 189 (student)
Character: Buffy

( high school comes with some surprises )

ficlet, 189, pg, buffy, btvs, deird1

Comments 17

snogged September 30 2010, 11:33:24 UTC

Excellent work! Very original. :)

deird1 September 30 2010, 22:40:32 UTC

Thanks!

author_by_night September 30 2010, 12:02:00 UTC

You capture Buffy's difficulty very well!

deird1 September 30 2010, 22:40:45 UTC

Thanks!

aerintine September 30 2010, 12:20:06 UTC

My heart. Oh, Buffy!

deird1 September 30 2010, 22:40:58 UTC

Glad you liked this!

katmarajade September 30 2010, 13:45:44 UTC

This is great-- you really captured that frustration and how no one GETS it. I especially liked the part where it said no one really wants her to answer anyway-- oh, Buffy. D: Fantastic work and a wonderfully original style.

deird1 September 30 2010, 22:41:09 UTC

Thanks!

brutti_ma_buoni September 30 2010, 17:39:54 UTC

That's our Buffy. Poor girl. Beautifully put together to show her frustrations.

deird1 September 30 2010, 22:41:21 UTC

Glad you liked it!