Prompt 174 -- Sea Change

[mabus101]

Title: Sea Change
Author: mabus101
Rating: PG
Word Count: 476
Prompt: 174 -- Water
Characters: Dawn
A/N: This was inspired by the recent discussions regarding Dawn's seemingly-lapsed Keyness, as well as much older discussions about the monks of Dagon.  Regrettably, given the prompt, I couldn't work Dagon the fish-god and the Cthulhu mythos in--I hear

Comments

[buffyangellvr23]

oooh nice one :)

[mabus101]

Thank you! :)

[snickfic]

Ohhhh. I like this very much. Especially this:

"But we did not make you to be just another drop in the ocean. You are the seafarer. And one day, when you are ready, you will set sail. That is why I have come--to wish you a grand journey."

Lovely imagery that, coupled with the meaning behind it, just about gives me shivers. "Not just another drop in the ocean" - I like that very much indeed.

[mabus101]

I'm always pleased (and amused, as I'm no poet) to be complimented on my imagery. I'm glad you enjoyed...and that's a great icon for this piece. ;)

[slaymesoftly]

Nice handling of the question. :)

[mabus101]

Glad you think so. I do try. :)

[ozma914]

good job!

[mabus101]

Thanks! :D

[timeofchange]

Love this!

[mabus101]

Woot!