167 fanfic: Losing

Apr 28, 2010 14:19

Title: Losing
Author: Mierke
Fandom & Disclaimer: Firefly’s not mine, it’s Joss Whedon’s. I’m just borrowing his world and very thankful for the chance.
Pairing/Characters: Zoe
Prompt: 167 Zoe (for still_grrr)
Words: 100
Rating: G
Spoilers/Timeline: Set after Serenity (the movie)

Losing )

167, firefly, g, drabble, zoe, mierke

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brunettepet April 28 2010, 16:14:17 UTC
Those last two lines say it all. Nicely done.

Caught a typo: They had helped the world win against the Allicance There's an extra c in Alliance

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mierke April 28 2010, 17:50:54 UTC
Thank you :)

Thanks for pointing it out to me! I was in a hurry getting this on the net, it's been behaving really obnoxious lately.

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cmk418 April 28 2010, 23:07:12 UTC
This is heartbreaking.

Nicely done!

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mierke April 29 2010, 14:31:27 UTC
Thank you :)

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angelus2hot April 30 2010, 02:42:09 UTC
Awesome drabble! Very sad and wonderfully written.

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mierke April 30 2010, 07:17:39 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad that it worked, I had some trouble with getting it right.

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