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153 fic - Dating Andrew Wells; Number One

Jan 20, 2010 21:24

Title: The Five Worst Things About Dating Andrew Wells - Number One
Author: deird1
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1033
Prompt: 153 (Persuasion, by Jane Austen)
Character: Dawn
Pairing: Dawn/Andrew

[A/N - This is the first part of a five-part fic, that will probably take me forever to write. This part should stand on its own, though.]

( having a crush on the wrong guy )

153, andrew, dawn, pg, btvs, deird1, fic

Comments 22

ozma914 January 20 2010, 10:42:40 UTC

Ouch! With the cliffhanger!

Nervous Dawn is so cute ...

deird1 January 20 2010, 20:48:25 UTC

Isn't she just?

Glad you like this!

gillo January 20 2010, 10:52:57 UTC

That was fun. Poor Dawn - even she can see it's wrong!

deird1 January 20 2010, 20:48:37 UTC

Glad you like it!

silver_galaxy January 20 2010, 14:00:32 UTC

Ooh, Andrew/Dawn, so cute!

You definitely have to write more of this soon :)

deird1 January 20 2010, 20:49:10 UTC

Thanks!

(Yes, I really must... if I can only get myself organised...)

bobthemole January 20 2010, 14:25:34 UTC

Awesome! Can't wait for more.

deird1 January 20 2010, 20:49:30 UTC

Thanks!

brunettepet January 20 2010, 18:43:04 UTC

You captured that awful nervousness of asking someone out and I enjoyed Dawn's mixed feelings about what a dork Andrew is and how annoying and how she shouldn't find all this cute. She shouldn't be so nervous but she's going out on a limb and it's hard to make the first move. Of course Andrew is totally oblivious, making every overture even harder. Poor Dawn. It's delightful.

deird1 January 20 2010, 20:49:46 UTC

I'm glad you like it!