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Prompt 146: Fiction

Dec 02, 2009 15:26

Title: Waiting, Ready
Author: duh_i_read
Rating: PG-13
Prompt: 146 (Brier Rose)
Word Count: 177
Characters: Alpha, Paul Ballard
AN: This was intended for prompt 145.

( Waiting, Ready )

alpha, ficlet, dollhouse, duh_i_read, pg13, 146

Comments 8

angelus2hot December 2 2009, 22:42:42 UTC

Great ficlet!

duh_i_read December 3 2009, 01:12:46 UTC

Thank you!

brunettepet December 2 2009, 23:14:05 UTC

This is great, though I think you meant thought rather than though in the last line.

duh_i_read December 3 2009, 01:12:16 UTC

*facepalm* Actually, the word was thought. Its corrected now.

Thank you.

sentine December 3 2009, 14:39:05 UTC

This is great -- I love the rhythm of it, becoming more and more urgent.

duh_i_read December 3 2009, 19:53:51 UTC

Thank you so much!

deird1 December 3 2009, 19:20:59 UTC

This is great!

duh_i_read December 3 2009, 19:47:49 UTC

Thank you!