This is really, really tight. Very nicely written - it just moves like lightning and leaves...a mark where it hits. Wow! Willow is totally in-voice and...her internal monologues balance her outer dialogue - well done!
Have you ever been to Kusadasi because you really capture it perfectly. I was there a couple of years ago and it is so crowded, a dizzing place. I will never forget the guys with the pins. Pinning them on all the good looking women. It was just surreal.
This was a great story too. Great look back at what Willow/Oz, what they could be. Beautiful story, really. Loved the descriptions and Willow's inner thoughts.
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This is really, really tight. Very nicely written - it just moves like lightning and leaves...a mark where it hits. Wow! Willow is totally in-voice and...her internal monologues balance her outer dialogue - well done!
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This was a great story too. Great look back at what Willow/Oz, what they could be. Beautiful story, really. Loved the descriptions and Willow's inner thoughts.
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willow/oz will always have a soft spot in my heart.
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