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136 drabble - Hangover

Sep 18, 2009 20:46

Title: Hangover
Author: deird1
Rating: PG
Word Count: 100
Prompt: 136 (the factory scene - Band Candy)
Characters: four adults who did some things they might regret...

( the next day )

136, ethan, giles, btvs, pg, drabble, joyce, snyder, deird1

Comments 20

silver_galaxy September 18 2009, 11:04:27 UTC

These reactions are great, especially Joyce's :P

deird1 September 18 2009, 11:26:36 UTC

Thanks!

slaymesoftly September 18 2009, 11:39:29 UTC

Great look at probable reactions. :)

deird1 September 18 2009, 19:33:21 UTC

Thanks!

cmk418 September 18 2009, 14:16:38 UTC

I love it and it's perfectly in character for each of them.

deird1 September 18 2009, 19:33:39 UTC

Thanks!

brunettepet September 18 2009, 17:20:25 UTC

This painted a vivid, in character morning after. Snyder taking his embarrassment out on the student body was especially fitting.

deird1 September 18 2009, 19:33:53 UTC

Glad you like it!

brutti_ma_buoni September 18 2009, 18:14:38 UTC

Aha: a tag, not a missing scene. And a believable one, too. Hooray for Joyce's baser instincts!

(I'm considering Snyder!poetry for this. Someone should probably stop me.)

deird1 September 18 2009, 19:35:43 UTC

Glad you like it!

Yeah, a tag was about as close as I could get. But I tried to get little elements of the scene in there (handcuffs, gun...) and think mainly about their responses to that particular scene.

(Why on earth would we stop you from something so awesome?)