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125 ficlet - Crime and Punishment

Jul 07, 2009 08:28

Title: Crime and Punishment
Author: deird1
Rating: PG
Word Count: 142
Prompt: 125 (opera - The Mikado)
Character: Connor

( justice )

125, ficlet, pg, ats, deird1, connor

Comments 6

angearia July 6 2009, 22:51:55 UTC

Too bad Connor couldn't see that Angelus the monster was already locked inside Angel. Then again, the key hasn't been thrown away but Angel does his best to keep it from being turned.

I very much enjoyed your storyteller's voice here.

deird1 July 6 2009, 23:15:24 UTC

Thanks!

(Ooh. Nice analogy-expanding with Angel and key-turning...)

brutti_ma_buoni July 7 2009, 17:48:08 UTC

Oh poor kid. Sure he knows what's what, and yet missing the important things. Nice use of the prompt too!

deird1 July 7 2009, 19:49:01 UTC

Thanks! (I do feel kinda sorry for Connor.)

snickfic July 7 2009, 21:55:06 UTC

Okay, this is totally not helpful, but as soon as we got to the "judge, jury, executioner" bit I totally switched over to Snyder. Alas, the drabble was not about Snyder.

But it is a very nice Connor drabble. :)

deird1 July 7 2009, 21:57:50 UTC

(Hee!)

Oh, and thanks!