008 Two ficlets

[blueanddollsome]

Title: Wallflower
Author: blueanddollsome
Rating: G
Word Count: 135
Prompt: 008 Serenity
Characters/Pairing: Serenity, Mal
Note: This is my first time writing in the Fireflyverse. I hope it turned out.

Fresh off the assembly line, shiny and new, she had all the standard features of a Firefly transport, her own unique serial number, and a lot of spunk.

Comments

[lorelei_frolick]

The Serenity one was nice, but I LOVED the "No mkaing out in the library" one! HA!
Yes, couches and young people are not a good mix for people uncomfortable with PDAs. Hee at Xander's utility closet line.

[blueanddollsome]

The JCR is very inspirational. :-)

[locker_monster]

Oh, the first one was lovely. Serenity truly is the tenth crew member.

And the second one, hee! It made me laugh.

[blueanddollsome]

Thanks for reading! :-)

[kgola]

cute Buffy story.

I really liked the Serenity/Mal one, but I felt it went too quickly after Mal showed up...

[blueanddollsome]

I was trying to keep it to drabble length. Didn't really work. Also, I wanted to focus on what happened before.

Thanks for the concrit. :-)

[xlivvielockex]

That first one was just beautiful. I really enjoyed it. It was a creative take on a prompt and really, if a ship could have characterization, it would be spot on.

The second one so made me laugh, you have no idea. All your voices were just so perfect with it. Nailed it perfectly. I loved it.

[blueanddollsome]

Thanks so much. I'm glad people are finding the library ficlet genuinely funny. :-)

[elizalavelle]

Hee no making out in the library! Nicely done!

I liked the first one as well, it was very sweet but I'm going to be giggling over the second one for a while yet :)

[blueanddollsome]

Thanks so much! I'm glad I'm making people laugh.