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Prompt 066: Ficlet: The Small Victories

May 21, 2008 14:17

Title: The Small Victories
Author: Piratescribe
Rating: PG
Word Count: 255
Prompt: 066: Anya
Characters/Pairing (if any): Anya, Giles

"Giles, what did you do with the--" Anya walked out of the basement of The Magic Box and stopped mid-sentence when she saw that Giles wasn’t in the shop.

Walking over to the front desk, she saw a quickly written note ( Read more... )

anya, giles, ficlet, 061-070, piratescribe, pg, btvs

Comments 16

deird1 May 21 2008, 19:22:20 UTC

"The cash register is fixed, and all is right with the world."

Hee! Very Anya.

piratescribe May 21 2008, 20:29:12 UTC

:D Thanks! I had a slightly less Anya sounding sentence in there at first, and I changed it because I thought the voice didn't work very well. Glad that the change worked :)

redrikki May 21 2008, 21:43:12 UTC

So adorably Anya. I loved her panic and anger that she couldn't free the money. So perfectly in character.

piratescribe May 22 2008, 00:41:49 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

angelus2hot May 21 2008, 23:53:42 UTC

Great Anya voice!

piratescribe May 22 2008, 00:42:52 UTC

Thank you :) I'm glad the voicing worked!

thrace_adams May 22 2008, 02:50:31 UTC

LOL this is so Anya! Well done.

piratescribe May 22 2008, 14:41:29 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

ozma914 May 24 2008, 09:09:51 UTC

It just goes to show, you can't stand between a person and their loved ones! And their loved fives, and loved tens, and loved twenties ... :-)

piratescribe May 24 2008, 23:40:09 UTC

:D Well put, ozma914, well put! :) Thanks for commenting!

ozma914 May 25 2008, 01:54:24 UTC

thanks, and you're welcome!