Comments | still_grrr: 065 ficlet

firefly124 in still_grrr

May 14, 2008 21:05

Title: Bump in the Night
Author: firefly_124
Rating: G
Word Count: 129
Prompt: 065 - mothers
Characters: Joyce

( Bump in the Night )

Comments 14

thrace_adams May 15 2008, 01:56:42 UTC

Oh wow...this was good.

firefly124 May 15 2008, 10:01:08 UTC

Thanks!

redrikki May 15 2008, 02:24:42 UTC

Oh, the irony of that last bit. Very nice, very sweet.

firefly124 May 15 2008, 10:02:57 UTC

Thanks!

ozma914 May 15 2008, 03:10:16 UTC

Great story, really well done; the last line was especially effective.

firefly124 May 15 2008, 10:05:07 UTC

Thanks!

angelus2hot May 15 2008, 12:33:18 UTC

Excellent!

firefly124 May 16 2008, 00:57:55 UTC

Thanks!

ubiquirk May 16 2008, 02:34:21 UTC

Love the irony and the protectiveness!

firefly124 May 16 2008, 12:00:01 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.