This is a scene I hadn't considered being written. I like Jenny being the one to come, and the reason why; and Joyce's "Sixth Sense" of being able to sense the supernatural was a nice touch.
Thanks! I'd always hated the idea of Joyce being alone when she died, so I wondered what would have happened had someone been there. I'm not sure where Jenny came from, but I just started writing and there she was.
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All fixed!
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Beautifully sad, I enjoyed reading this
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Thanks for reading!
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