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22:: Fading Out

Jul 14, 2007 00:23

Title: Fading Out
Author: smurfyfredels
Rating: G
Word Count:100
Prompt: 22:: Unseen
Characters/Pairing: Marcie Ross

( And did you guys see his toupee? I mean, it looks like a cabbage )

021-030, minor btvs char, smurfyfredels, g, drabble, btvs

Comments 15

xlivvielockex July 18 2007, 03:06:53 UTC

Just really a beautiful piece here. I feel so bad for Marcie. I love the language you used, as always. The last three paragraphs are just fantastic and hit on amazing notes.

divadea July 21 2007, 03:42:10 UTC

Aw, so sad. I always wished invisible Marcie would have come back at some point, but alas... Nice drabble.

boy_named_susie July 23 2007, 21:45:40 UTC

Aww, such a sad look at Marcie. You did such a great job making her sympathetic, and I love your use of language in this one.

wereleopard58 September 15 2007, 10:40:48 UTC

Amazing