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I Miss You

Jul 04, 2007 11:40

Title: I Miss You
Prompt: 20? Mourning
Rating: G
Characters: Buffy, Willow, Xander
Word Count: 204
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Comments 18

not_purrrfect July 4 2007, 18:23:07 UTC

So sad and so sweet. Very well written.

slaymesoftly July 5 2007, 01:02:51 UTC

Thank you so much. :)

lauratd July 4 2007, 21:31:26 UTC

I love the JD for Spike.

slaymesoftly July 5 2007, 01:03:43 UTC

Hee! I'm glad. He deserved it. :)

imbaskinrobbins July 4 2007, 21:31:28 UTC

Beautifully written, and a wonderful last line.

slaymesoftly July 5 2007, 01:04:27 UTC

Thank you. How nice of you to say so. :)

rayruz July 4 2007, 21:31:34 UTC

Nice writing.

slaymesoftly July 5 2007, 01:01:49 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you think so.

xlivvielockex July 5 2007, 22:54:33 UTC

Very bittersweet look at them remembering those that they loved. I like how you managed to put in that they moved on with their lives but still got together, even if it was a smaller affair.

Just one thing, we are trying to discourage large blocks of text and such before the header. Next time, if you could just put an Author's Note (A/N) as the last thing in the header, that would great. :) (You can see either Sarah or I's posts to see how we format to put the A/N in if you need to)

slaymesoftly July 6 2007, 00:09:25 UTC

Oh, okay. Sorry! I tried to follow the header format, didn't think about what I was doing before that. I'll remember next time - no talking before the cut! LOL