Prompt 014- Pain "Before the Full Moon"

[rayruz]

Title: Before the Full Moon
Author: Rachel
Rating: PG
Words: 212
Prompt: 014 "Pain"
Characters: Veruca, Oz
Author's Note: The other day my friend and I were discussion how Pain is a very werewolfy song.

The moon hung nearly full above Sunnydale.

Two nights until the full moon and she felt it. The wolf writhing beneath her skin, begging to be released,

Comments

[wereleopard58]

Very cool i loved the way you brough a character that i have not read much of, brilliant job

[xlivvielockex]

Great use of the prompt. I love how you showed how both of them were dealing with the feelings differently. Perfect Oz, all cool and collected. And you do feel sympathy for Veruca. Great use of language too.

[redrikki]

I like the juxtapositioning of Veruca's reveling in her wolf and Oz dreading his. It was beautifully and poetically done.

[alwaysjbj]

Lovely! I like your use of repetition to show the contrast and at the same time the similarities between them.

[slaymesoftly]

A very nicely done look at what Oz and Veruca had to deal with.