Fic! Hawaii-five-O Standalone, lighthearted slash

[still_glorious]

Title: Secrets
Pairings: Steve/Lt. Bradley Jacks (2.03/2.10), Steve/Danno
Genre: Slash (can't really say what else)
Rating: Phew, NC 17 - R (Sex and language)
Word count: 6359
Summary: Danny doesn't like secrets and there are already too many. However, in his attempt to find out the truth he is confronted with something he really didn't expect.
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Comments

[lunachickk]

Nothing like a Steve with a mission! This was hot!

[still_glorious]

Thank you. So is your very hot icon ;)

[mcparrot]

That was hot and a really interesting take on their 'reveal' and first time.
Loved it.
There are loads of typos in there though - would you like a beta? (I need my head read, but something that good needs to be right.)

[still_glorious]

yes, i love to have this grammar beta. i made a request but nobody answer so at some point i figured what the hell. and i'm glad you think its hot lol

[antivol]

A new mission for Steve! That was a fun story, and an original first time, I don't think I've ever read anything like this before. It suits them well! Thanks for sharing.

[still_glorious]

Gladly. and thank for taking the time to comment.

[lupina78]

Boy, had that been hot!! And funny, too! :)

Saving this to my memories! Thanks for sharing! ♥

[still_glorious]

Thank you so much for commenting!!!

[navyvet90]

Normally, I won't even read 1st person POV, I have such an aversion to it. However, I enjoyed this hot story in spite of that, so that's saying a lot. Your 'Danny-voice' was spot-on! Nice work!

[still_glorious]

Thank you so much. Writing it in POV was a hard decision because it's not that easy to make it sound good. Thanks to my beta is sounds much better like that. And there is nothing better than to hear from someone who originally doesn't like that form, that it's liked regardless. Thank you again so very much.