FML and stuff I shouldn't have been writing

Nov 20, 2010 23:13

Today was kind of a crap day. Really, just kind of crap. So instead of being responsible and dealing with things or even working on fic that is DUE, I wrote some Ohmiya. Finding Nino Ohmiya because porn takes too long and makes me cry rather than making me feel better.

Links to past parts! First and second. Even though this was written ( Read more... )

finding nino, au, arashi

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aegistheia November 21 2010, 06:39:26 UTC
[Reposted because I left out a very important bit XD;;]

I'm sorry to hear/read that you had a sucky day. *HUG* I hope writing this made you feel better, because it certainly made MY day wonderful.

EEEEE I love Nino's resistance to Ohno is in the form of the rest of his bandmates. Who aren't actually all that good at helping him resist at all, really. (Also, Nino is terrible at lying to the people who love him most; how can he expect to hide anything from his sister? And Aiba ♥ His driver must love him [and all of them] a hell of a lot.)

Oh man, the best thing about the kiss scene (and have I told you how much I love you kiss scenes?) is that there is a conversation before it. There's this thrumming UST between the two of them, prone on the bed and facing each other, and they just talk about domestic, homely things back on Niijima for the longest time until Ohno can't stand it anymore ( ... )

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araanaz9 November 21 2010, 07:02:06 UTC
Hi! You don't know me but I may have been stalking your journal for a bit. >.> I'm in love with this. Really. I don't usually read fic until they're complete, but this... *__* Once I started I just couldn't help myself. It's beautiful. And I love your Ohno so much! Oh and the atmosphere between them, the feelings, the longing, the sdkfjskf. And the fish. Yes. I apologize for the lack of coherence, I'll try to do better next time. If I can.

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rinalin November 21 2010, 20:14:03 UTC
That was the seriously hottest kissing I've read in maybe ever. Kissing is HARD and this was cold-shower-hot!

Plus... THEY LOVE EACH OTHER SO MUCH!

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elfiepike November 22 2010, 05:40:08 UTC
I ENJOYED THIS GREATLY. whoops, all caps. i love that nino is unable to resist ohno. :D :D :D and that aiba is a genius (fact!).

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beltenebra November 22 2010, 14:41:12 UTC
I've only now just caught up on this whole thing and I am completely enchanted.

This kissing in this story is... amazing. Words can't do it justice, the sweetness and longing is so palpable. It's beautiful and heart-breaking and exhilerating all at once.

It goes without saying that your Arashi is amazing, the friendships and poor Jun caught between wanting to be happy for Oh-chan and wanting what's best for their careers. Aiba is a ray of sunshine as always. But the way you're written Oh-chan and Nino is incredible, the connection you created is jut breathtakingly lovely.

I am really looking forward to more of this should you decide to continue.

And I'm sorry you had a crappy day. Wonderful people like you should only be allowed to have mildly annoying days at most. ♥

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