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[stilettomccaney]

I wrote some fic guys! 'Tis SMUUUUTTTTTYYYYY!!!  XD ENJOY!!!

Title-Bottled Up
Prompt: Out of suffering have emerged the strongest souls. The most massive characters are seared with scars ~Khalil Gibran (from onceuponapillow)
Rating- R for SMUT XD

Comments

[emeraldeyes06]

Wow. :) :) I loved this a lot.

House finding Cuddy at a bar gripped me from the start, and you really captured Cuddy's vulnerability. I love how you portrayed House as the reluctant rescuer, and then the two of them coming together after a traumatic event was amazing.

The sex was hot, emotional and beautiful. This is exactly how I would imagine them making love, with House being so passionate and Cuddy losing herself like that. You always write House so well when he's making love, with the things he says and the way he acts. *squee!!*

Great work!! :)

[stilettomccaney]

Thank you so much! I am so glad you liked it because I had so many problems with it! lol...I was almost afraid to post it. But I'm ecstatic that you like the way I write House during love-making =) Your review made my hour...

[akemi16]

this was awesome!! :D (and HOT!) i love the way you wrote house in this, and you captured Cuddy's emotions especially in the beginning extraordinarily well. :) fantastic work!!

[stilettomccaney]

Thank you so much and I'm glad you enjoyed it! =)

[bassetlove]

this was lovely! i love how much he respects her, even when she's trying to seduce him. you really caputred their complexity well. great job!

couple tiny things: you change tenses briefly (from present to past) up near the beginning. you might want to fix that.

also, i'd love to know why cuddy was drinking and crying. did i miss that? is this a post-ep for a specific episode, perhaps?

thanks!

[stilettomccaney]

Lol....do i really?! I've read this thing so many times it just started to all morph 2gether...lol. I'll go fix it and why Cuddy was at the bar is left open for interpretation...GLAD YA LIKED IT! XD

[ironic_sauce]

Guh. this was super hot and so sweet too.
Thank you for sharing with us!

[stilettomccaney]

You're very welcome! Thank you for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

[katherynmae]

That was amazing! I love fics like this ... maybe I'm just cruel, but reading about a broken Cuddy, who get cheered up by House, is my favorite. :')

And yay for smut! Smut always makes a good Huddy fic better.

[stilettomccaney]

thank you for reading! :) and I'm glad you liked it!