Snippet: "Ok fine," Shawn mutters, stopping as they reach Gus' faithful blue car. "Anyway," he continues, as if the last slight didn't happen at all, clapping his hands together joyously. "Are you ready to help me with this case yet?!"
Gus pinches his nose in annoyance, before huffing out another breath. "Later, Shawn, ok? Later. I have to go to work right now."
Shawn apparently has no come back to that as he watches Gus wave awkwardly, his gaze stiff and a bit guilty, as he climbs into the car, and drives away. "Fine," he mutters emptily. "I get to have all the fun." Not really though, because having his best friend by his side always was half the fun...
He looks nervous, keeps wiping his palms on the front of this pants, but his name tag's on straight and the knot in his tie is decent: clumsy but competent, like he's spent a lot of time practicing.
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Goal: 100 words
Word count: 229
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"Ok fine," Shawn mutters, stopping as they reach Gus' faithful blue car. "Anyway," he continues, as if the last slight didn't happen at all, clapping his hands together joyously. "Are you ready to help me with this case yet?!"
Gus pinches his nose in annoyance, before huffing out another breath. "Later, Shawn, ok? Later. I have to go to work right now."
Shawn apparently has no come back to that as he watches Gus wave awkwardly, his gaze stiff and a bit guilty, as he climbs into the car, and drives away. "Fine," he mutters emptily. "I get to have all the fun." Not really though, because having his best friend by his side always was half the fun...
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He looks nervous, keeps wiping his palms on the front of this pants, but his name tag's on straight and the knot in his tie is decent: clumsy but competent, like he's spent a lot of time practicing.
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