Picnic Day Part 2

Jul 08, 2008 16:30

Title: Picnice Day Part 2
Word Count: 4, 383
Rating: NC 17
Summary: Pure unadulterated sex, no plot - not really, follows on from Picnic Day part 1 which was where the "plot" such as it is was. 
Author's note; Yes, this section is really really long, i got a bit carried away. It can be read in sections though if it gets too - um - much!

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shinypinkrazor July 8 2008, 17:23:49 UTC
OWCH.

I still love it :) Yummy. Keep it coming girlie!

AS YOU WISH!! Lol I love that film ;)

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rose_cain July 10 2008, 15:10:50 UTC
Thanks! there will be more....soon....i'll give y'all space to recover first!

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rose_cain July 10 2008, 15:11:37 UTC
Thanks! needless to say i had far more fun than i should in writing it!

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lady_linnet July 8 2008, 22:27:04 UTC
O_O

O_o

:DDDD

^^

My reaction after I finished reading it, seriously. Took a moment to process. They smoke! Wow. I love the mental image of them smoking.

And, uh. Hot. Way too hot. As usual. But more than usual. If that...makes sense.

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rose_cain July 10 2008, 15:12:32 UTC
heh heh....nice reaction! i just imagined that they would smoke - of course one's not allowed to really in movies any more!

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love_n_lost July 9 2008, 10:13:27 UTC
....ok. WOW. Just when I don't think it can get any hotter, you prove me wrong.

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SO delicious. I wish I could type more, but once again you have rendered me speechless. In a good way of course. ♥

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rose_cain July 10 2008, 15:15:56 UTC
thankyou! i'm trying to press on with the "plot" now cause i love the ending (so modest me!) but there'll be heaps of "deleted scenes" to post once i get there!

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operavampirate July 10 2008, 01:19:40 UTC
Mmm-guh! Beautifully morbid in the hottest way possible. I applaud - a lot.

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rose_cain July 10 2008, 15:17:26 UTC
yay! i make people make noises! heh heh!

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