Fic: The Trial by Leslie Knope - Part 3/?

[stiffleaves]

Title: The Trial by Leslie Knope, Part 3/?
Fandom: Parks and Recreation
Pairings: Leslie/Ben, Ann/Other, Ann/Chris
Spoilers: The Treaty. A couple of winks to both The Comeback Kid and Campaign Ad but squint and you'll miss 'em.
Rating: R, verging on PG-13 for this part
Word count: ~10,000 (this part, but broken up into 3 sections spanning 3 days

Comments

[rikyl]

I reread this today and the new scene you added is perfect. I really love seeing the progression of Leslie's thoughts and how seriously you're taking the ethical dilemmas involved while also keeping it really in character and funny. Can't wait to see where you're taking it next.

[stiffleaves]

Thanks! I like the new scene too, not least because I think it gives Ann more of a trajectory as well (from panic to sadness to determination to feeling a bit better).
The women's representative scene especially is a lot more cohesive for your comments, too, I think, as well as a hundred little things throughout. So, yay you! ;)

[craponaspatula]

Catching up on this, and finding it fascinating.

Favorite moment: recalling the Danish-Peruvian war.

[stiffleaves]

Cool! Thanks! I'm hoping to get the next chapter done soon-ish.