these foolish things the social network rpf (andrew/jesse, emma/kieran) inspired by this interview The first meeting of The Garfield-Eisenberg-Stone Mutual Appreciation Society.
YOU ALREADY KNOW THAT I ADORE THIS SO MUCH! i love emma shutting the boys down with her car horn and the michael cera comment was so spot on, i don't even know what to do with myself :') just the whole eating part, really, with the fry stealing and emma's ~epiphany~ is my favorite. also lol @ justin bieber.
creys at your authors note at the end ;_____; i am unworthy.
it is that time of year! but hopefully you'll have more time for writing later. i think you've got such a good grasp on their dynamic; it feels true to me, at least.
I really, really enjoyed this. You have such a smooth, balanced style, and I am equally as charmed by the dialogue (especially Emma's, I can hear her in my head) as I am by their actions. They all feel very physically present -- I love the little things, like the panicked flutter of Jesse's eyelids, Emma protecting her food, how so much of Jesse's emotions seem to be centered around his mouth. And Andrew's characterization is so pleasantly contained, sweet and energetic without coming off as goofy. Also great: The way you handle the tension between Jesse and Andrew from Emma's POV. It feels so subtle and natural and doesn't overpower her side of the story but is also incredibly satisfying to read. I will definitely come back and reread this later.
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creys at your authors note at the end ;_____; i am unworthy.
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YOU ARE MY SOULMATE OMG IS THIS REAL LIFE?
Haha sorry just had to get that out. Never thought I would meet a Rain and MBLAQ fan who is equally obsessed with our little Jewnicorns as me. :)
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