i caught a glimpse and now it haunts me

Oct 17, 2010 01:59

a cracked smile, a silent shout
the social network (mark/eduardo)
title from this song
an expansion of the infamous bathroom scene

paradise in a bathroom stall )

pairing: mark/eduardo, fandom: tsn, rating: r

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4rightchords_ October 17 2010, 06:11:12 UTC
Love it.

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stickyvalentine October 18 2010, 04:18:25 UTC
i'm so glad!

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trundlebed October 17 2010, 06:56:39 UTC
Oh man, that was fantastic. Just what I was hoping for after that scene in the movie. Well done.

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stickyvalentine October 18 2010, 04:18:44 UTC
thanks-- i'm pleased you liked it

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sunnyskittlez October 17 2010, 07:48:26 UTC
oh that was wonderful.

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stickyvalentine October 18 2010, 04:18:58 UTC
thanks for thinking so!

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gigantic October 17 2010, 15:06:56 UTC
Dude, I hear you on how strange and uncomfortable it is to try to this like Mark, but I think you did a great job of it here, capturing how he never seems fully present with people. He always seems to be thinking about the next thing he wants, or at the next new, intriguing thing, and of course it's Eduardo here. I like the intimacy of it, even though they don't actually see each other. The detail about Mark thinking he can smell Eduardo's aftershave is so great.

I look forward to the other fic you're writing!

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stickyvalentine October 18 2010, 04:20:48 UTC
ddjhfksf thank you! mark is a hot mess that much is sure

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makesomelove October 17 2010, 15:50:06 UTC
If this is suffering THEN SIGN ME UP. Ugh, I LOVED this.

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stickyvalentine October 18 2010, 04:18:15 UTC
OIC SO YOU ARE A MASOCHISTIC THAT'S COOL

thxxxxx

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