Dude, I hear you on how strange and uncomfortable it is to try to this like Mark, but I think you did a great job of it here, capturing how he never seems fully present with people. He always seems to be thinking about the next thing he wants, or at the next new, intriguing thing, and of course it's Eduardo here. I like the intimacy of it, even though they don't actually see each other. The detail about Mark thinking he can smell Eduardo's aftershave is so great.
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I look forward to the other fic you're writing!
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