First Day

[stevenagy]

Revisions to the prologue for Sacrifices is done. I've taken into account UWG critiques, both on this manuscript and on Only The Dead, and I think I've got a handle on some of my problems with plotting and character motivation

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[spiziks]

>In this particular case: boy meets girl, boy loses girl, boy brings girl back to life.

It's funny because it's true.