Comments | stephanometra: FIC: "Focus," Jon/Ryan, NC17

stephanometra

FIC: "Focus," Jon/Ryan, NC17

Jan 26, 2009 19:38

I swore up and down this morning that I wouldn't work on anything else for porn battle unless I got some work done on at least one of my WIPs.

...Stop laughing, it's really not that funny. >:(

Title: Focus
Pairing: Jon/Ryan
Rating: NC17
Summary: "Well, just a guess, but I'm pretty sure you're actually supposed to film the sex part."
Warnings: I ( Read more... )

fic: content: slash, stoner stoner boyfrands y'all, fic: fandom: patd, fic: porn battle, fic: content: porn, fic

Comments 41

lyo January 27 2009, 01:54:05 UTC

♥♥♥♥

stephanometra January 27 2009, 02:30:52 UTC

LOL FAIL ♥

cynthia_arrow January 27 2009, 02:43:19 UTC

*dies and is dead*

Seriously, way to up the hotness quotient by adding some realistic emotion (and faily-ness) to it. :)

stephanometra January 27 2009, 02:47:43 UTC

HAND-HOLDING. I DON'T EVEN KNOW.

Glad you enjoyed it!

anoneknewmoose January 27 2009, 02:48:21 UTC

Om nom nom, and I love the line you added. ♥

stephanometra January 27 2009, 04:16:07 UTC

HOLDING HANDS, CINDY. I AM A TWELVE-YEAR-OLD GIRL.

just_katarin January 27 2009, 02:51:09 UTC

I seriously love everything about this ♥__♥

stephanometra January 27 2009, 04:15:43 UTC

Thank you!

boweryd January 27 2009, 04:09:35 UTC

And, agreeing with her, I went back to work...and I added hand-holding.

Are you suddenly me, or something?

Oh wait, no your're not, because this was SO HOT LIKE BURNING, JFC.

stephanometra January 27 2009, 04:15:35 UTC

OH WHATEVER, LIKE YOU DON'T WRITE TOTALLY HOT HOTNESS ALL THE DAMN TIME.

boweryd January 27 2009, 04:23:51 UTC

OH YOUR FACE! "La la la, let's come on Brendon's face!" is not the same as HOT ASS JON AND RYAN MAKING FUMBLY SEX TAPES. Nrgh.

stephanometra January 27 2009, 04:24:41 UTC

IF ONLY THERE WERE SOME WAY TO COMBINE THE TWO.

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