Comments | stephanometra: FIC: "Frozen in the Moment," Jon/Tom, NC17

stephanometra

FIC: "Frozen in the Moment," Jon/Tom, NC17

Jan 25, 2009 19:59

Porn Battle VII is live. :D

Title: Frozen in the Moment
Pairing: Jon/Tom
Rating: NC17
Summary: steady as the night is cold, heat the frost can't touch
Warnings: tame, tame, tame
Notes: For Porn Battle, prompts: "smoke," "frost," "still." Thanks to lyo for letting me talk at her and anoneknewmoose for the once-over. 1300 words.

( Tom smokes and freezes and watches, wishing he had his camera. )

fic: content: slash, fic: porn battle, fic: content: porn, fic: fandom: bandslash, fic

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stephanometra January 26 2009, 14:01:35 UTC

Thanks!

bkm5191 January 28 2009, 12:34:38 UTC

They're both in that quiet, thoughtful stage of drunkenness, hunched over against the cold.

I loved that line.

stephanometra January 28 2009, 12:44:01 UTC

♥

ww0308 January 29 2009, 22:37:56 UTC

Really well done!

stephanometra January 30 2009, 00:32:36 UTC

♥

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stephanometra February 18 2009, 05:59:01 UTC

Thank you!

blindmouse January 5 2011, 09:03:15 UTC

This is such a lovely shivery little fic.