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The Change of a Malfoy | Rose, Hermione | Rated: T

Feb 21, 2010 22:42

Title: The Change of a Malfoy
Author: thesteppyone
Rating: T for language
Warnings: General
Featured Characters/Pairings: Rose, Hermione
Word Count: 2,993
Summary: Something has changed in Scorpius Malfoy and Rose wants to know why. More than that, she wants to know if it's okay to try and get to know the changed Scorpius or should she stay away? Thankfully ( Read more... )

characters: rose weasley, genre: general, gen, characters: hermione granger, 2010

Comments 10

drcjsnider February 22 2010, 01:11:56 UTC

Oh very nice... like the relationship you show between Hermione and Rose... lovely mom/daughter dynamic :)

step_fics February 22 2010, 12:47:41 UTC

Thank you :) I'm glad you liked it, I really enjoyed writing the relationship between Rose and Hermione, I might do it again! :)

Thanks for commenting :)

crumplehornedki February 22 2010, 01:35:08 UTC

lol - I love that Hermione was trying to deny her school antics to Rose!

I thought this was a great piece, especially when Hermione didn't know the answer to something so absolutely had to go and look up the answer - very in character

One small grammar issue A second later are were mini marshmallows floating in both mugs.

step_fics February 22 2010, 12:46:41 UTC

Thanks for the grammar find, hon :)

I figured Rose would always use her Mum's adventures to her advantage in an arguement!

Glad you like it and thanks for commenting :)

rose_starr February 22 2010, 03:03:16 UTC

Oh ♥ ♥ ♥

How much do I love that you wrote this ... and for me?!!!!

THANK YOU!! ♥

Rose is fabulous and Hermione is perfection (and omg, how freaking awesome that she didn't know all the answers in the recent history *snort*)!!!

You ROCK!!!! *dances*

step_fics February 22 2010, 12:44:47 UTC

Lol, you just know that Hermione would have to fill the gap in her knowledge once she realised she had one!

I'm so glad you liked it, hon, thanks again for the awesome beta job. Love you!

realmer06 February 22 2010, 04:41:23 UTC

Okay, so . . . I'm gonna make you a deal. You write more about Rose, and I'll write more about Ron? Yeah?

Seriously, this was wonderful and adorable, and I want more! I'm fascinated by this relationship between Hermione and her daughter, and the best part of it for me was:

"'The good one? Mum you helped smuggle an illegal dragon out the country!'

'That's neither here nor there!'

'You helped Sirius Black and a doomed Hippogryff escape.'

'Neither's that!'

'Broke into the Ministry, twice,' I hold up two fingers, 'Gringotts once,' another finger went up, 'Hogwarts,' another.

'Rose Weasley I'll hex your fingers together in a minute!'"

Brilliant. Because she totally would.

Really well done!

step_fics February 22 2010, 12:43:43 UTC

Deal! I really enjoyed writing this and I want to write more about Rose and discover her character more. I even got thinking about doing a third part to Together Forever/Searching which is Rose's story as I left it on a bit of a WTF? ending.

Yes, you must write more Ron and Hermione, either or both, I don't care! :D

Thanks for reviewing hon, means a lot. *hugs*

daisymaeevans February 22 2010, 14:11:52 UTC

I love your Rose; her personality is so vibrant and dynamic. (Just as you'd expect from Ron and Hermione's daughter!) I adore the part where she's listing Hermione's less-than-tidy youthful adventures!