Mist and Musings | Hr | Rating: G

Feb 20, 2008 22:42

Title: Mist and Musings
Rating: G
Characters: Hermione and her dad
Words: 1020
Author's Note: I wrote this in May last year and then, apparently, forgot all about it. I think there was a plan to extend it at one point but I really don't think that's gonna happen! This hasn't been beta-ed so apologies for any mistakes!
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gen, rating: g, year: 2008, genre: angst

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leviathan0999 February 20 2008, 22:55:30 UTC
I loved this when I read it before, and I love it still. Wonderful wonderful work.

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thesteppyone February 23 2008, 13:08:51 UTC
*hugs*

Thanks Jon, much appreciated.

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xedra February 21 2008, 00:20:47 UTC
First time reading this one, and I loved it. I really enjoy these glimpses into Hermione relationship with her dad. :D

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thesteppyone February 23 2008, 13:08:25 UTC
I dunno why, but I always write her parenty relationship stuff with her dad! lol You never know, I might write one with her mum eventually!

Thanks for commenting, mate :D

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ms_worplesdon February 21 2008, 00:59:29 UTC
This was wonderful and bittersweet. I really, really enjoyed it. The hint of what's to come and thinking of how it must have affected her. So sad. :(

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thesteppyone February 23 2008, 13:02:36 UTC
I'm really glad you liked it. I always feel for Hermione when she's at home, because she doesn't have much contact with what/who she loves.

*hugs you*

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shygryf February 21 2008, 01:20:55 UTC
lovely

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thesteppyone February 23 2008, 12:47:14 UTC
Thanks mate :D

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inkvoices February 21 2008, 10:46:14 UTC
My little quibble would be that Hermione's Dad uses her name nearly every time he speaks, which is a bit unrealistic overkill.

The tone is lovely, the last line is perfect and I liked the part at the beginning where she thinks about which piece of news is worse. As a geography student I also grinned at the line some voicing their opinions on Global Warming a little louder, as if they knew that was the reason for the strange weather anomalies, which is a great and succint description of the British public when it comes to dicussing more about the weather than the fact that it's raining.

Lovely genfic :o)

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thesteppyone February 23 2008, 12:46:52 UTC
Would you believe I actually took some of the 'Hermione's' out? lol You're right though and there were many more 'Dads' in there before I went on a deleting rampage! lol

Hehe, yes I thought the Global Warming comment was kind cool :D

Thanks for the wonderful in depth comment :D

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