Searching - Chapter 8

Sep 13, 2007 12:36

Title: Searching
Rating: T
Pairings: Hermione/Ron, some very minor Harry/Ginny
Words: 2,010 ish
Warnings: Angst
Summary: Set after 'Together Forever' and during the final confrontation with Voldemort and the time straight after. Ron has to search for the one he loves in a place he's not sure really exists.
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het, year: 2007, series: searching, pairing: ron/hermione, genre: angst, rating: r

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mrsquizzical September 13 2007, 11:57:42 UTC
oooh you're so clever! that's so plotty and stuff....

and i went 'eek' when he said 'fucking' to hermione's dad! (not that you can blame him!)

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thesteppyone September 13 2007, 12:11:32 UTC
lol, yes, that would be why it took so long to write. Making up magical medicine-y stuff is HARD! (Normal people would plan major points like that at the beginning of a fic, but not me!)

And yes, he did, but I thought he deserved a bit of anger venting. He wants to help his Hermione!

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shocolate September 13 2007, 13:49:47 UTC
Her little boy was curled up, asleep on the cold hard floor. Tears instantly filled her eyes and she started walking forward towards him.

Oh!

‘You said that this stuff had become part of our system so it would be like her losing all the white blood cells or something, and she can’t replace it like she would normal cells because…because, it’s not naturally in our system so her body doesn’t know how to!’

I love it when he's clever!

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thesteppyone September 13 2007, 19:17:32 UTC
yes, he is rather sext when he's clever :D

*drifts off...*

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amieam September 13 2007, 14:18:17 UTC
I love the scene between Molly and Ron. Ron needs some affection from his Mum every now and then.

I get the feeling that Ron is going to have to fight to do what he knows is right.

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thesteppyone September 13 2007, 19:18:34 UTC
Yes he does!

And you may be right there!

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hpaa September 13 2007, 19:10:17 UTC
*is totally loving the plot*

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thesteppyone September 13 2007, 19:19:27 UTC
Yay! Writing magical medical stuff is WELL hard! I didn't have a clue what I was letting myself in for!

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kerosinkanister September 13 2007, 20:21:29 UTC
Let him try to help her! Only not get himself killed.

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