Coming To Terms, Chapter 5

Jun 29, 2010 19:12

 Title:  Coming to Terms, Chapter 5/10
Fandom: House, MD
Pairings: House/Cuddy, Wilson friendship
Warnings:  Explicit content in some chapters.
Summary:  In the weeks following "Help Me", House, Wilson and Cuddy all have some adjustments to make.  
Disclaimer:  Seriously?  You do know I am not David Shore, right?

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house, sharkverse, coming to terms, multi-chap, fanfic

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julessunshine82 June 30 2010, 00:54:27 UTC
Holy CRAP. Your dialogue might be the best House/Cuddy I've ever read. I died when he called her "beautiful" and she was like WTH?

I also love the image of her crap being around his apartment after only two times. That seems so appropriate and crazily warped speed, like I imagine they'll go.

Everything about this chapter was great--love how you brought Alvie into it. Love the Wilson hideage. I think you've got great insight into these characters, and I hope to read more very soon!

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aprettywastex3 June 30 2010, 03:55:10 UTC
HELLO. DORIS EGAN.
YOU ARE AWESOME AND I CAN'T TELL YOU HOW MUCH I LOVE YOUR FANFICS.
KEEP EM COMING PLZ.

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thefool189 June 30 2010, 04:04:18 UTC
shhhhh. don't blow her cover.

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aprettywastex3 June 30 2010, 04:04:59 UTC
SORRY. I MEAN EORIS DEGAN ;)

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bassetlove June 30 2010, 04:08:29 UTC
wow. that. was. awesome. your dialogue is still amazing. perfect - it's like you really GET these characters, their relationships, how long they've known each other and the particular ways in which they speak to each other. i'm never not amazed.

also, just out of curiosity, have you watched this show from the beginning? for a first time house fic writer- if that's what you are - you have an alarming grasp of the history of the series. i'm very impressed. and if you have written more, can we see it? :D

i love when he calls her beautiful and then masks it with dutch. i love how they actually talk about lucas - i'd love to see more of that. i love how they gossip about wilson, just like wilson and house gossip about her. love it. love it. love it all.

thank you!

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stenveny June 30 2010, 04:31:24 UTC
I'm new to House-dom, actually, but over the last year or so I've seen nearly every episode in re-runs, plus all of the season 6 original airings. I purchased seasons 1-5 on DVD and have started to watch them in order.

This is my first House fic. I'm expecting to wrap it up in about 4-5 more chapters.

And thank you all, but trust me, if I had Doris Egan's income and acquaintance with Hugh Laurie, I would not be writing fic. I'd be paying Hugh outrageous sums to let me eat mini-quiches off his abs.

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missbuterfly June 30 2010, 04:44:31 UTC
wow. This is getting better by chap.
I read everything tonight, and now I´m waiting for more chaps.
I really enjoy it. Keep going. Great work.

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pamina57 June 30 2010, 07:17:56 UTC
Loooved it!! Can't believe this is the first fic you're writing o_O seems like you've been doing that your whole life...

Everything I wanted to say about this chap has already been said, wonderful dialogues, him walling her 'beautiful' and her reaction was outrageously in character and ‘Buwurgewariflig’. Loved the meaning of Wilson's actions, the mention of Alvie, actually I'm amazed about this chapter! And the way you put in the deep feelings of the characters without actually saying it out loud is impressing!

Yeah, I'm completely fascinated...

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