fic: Wet Cardboard (1/1)

Feb 01, 2014 03:14

Title: Wet Cardboard ( Read more... )

h50, codas, h50fic, season 4 codas, mcdanno

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larewi February 1 2014, 11:49:21 UTC
Is it freakishly wrong that I watched the episode and then the first thing I did was come looking for the fic that you had written? This was.......aaarghhh, I don't know what this was, but it's 1am where I am too, so I know what it would be to have someone knock on my door right now.

I love the way that you write these characters, this could so be a between the shows scene to keep us going. Now I'm going to have to go and read something bland and boring just so that I can get to sleep!!!!

P.S. Third to last paragraph you missed the s on said.

Love you and all your fic, Thanks for making my day.

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stellarmeadow February 4 2014, 02:17:18 UTC
I prefer to think of it as flattering, not worrying! :)

Thank you so, so much! I'm so happy they're in character and that it seems like it fits in so well! :)

And thanks for the heads up on the missing s - I noticed after I was reading it again later that night. The problem of writing so late and in such a hurry.

Thanks again!! :):)

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ncisvu_lj February 1 2014, 13:23:12 UTC
This was such a powerful piece. I love how you wrote them... Danny being there for Steve, even if he can't put into words what their off the job relationship is. That makes it feel so natural and true. Also the comparison between Steve listening to his father die and Gracie almost losing her father the same way. I loved it!!

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stellarmeadow February 4 2014, 02:19:01 UTC
Thank you so much!! :):) I'm so happy that it worked, and that it was powerful! Always good to know it works outside my head, too. :)

Thank you!! :)

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gyri February 1 2014, 16:02:00 UTC
Excellent.

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stellarmeadow February 4 2014, 02:19:14 UTC
Thank you! :)

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sexycazzy February 3 2014, 00:20:59 UTC
as soon as Steve said in your lovely CODA story about knowing how it feel to have heard your father being killed over the phone and that he didn't want Grace to experience the same, I suddenly went OHHHHH so that's why Steve looked like he went to a dark place in the car on the show...I can't believe that I forgot about that!!

Anyway, as always, your CODA was awesome and so full of emotions!

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stellarmeadow February 4 2014, 02:20:51 UTC
Yeah, it was like oh, ouch...poor Steve! So sad! :( I'm so glad you enjoyed the coda, and that it was full of emotions. Thank you!! :):)

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cherish4 February 16 2014, 14:47:06 UTC
I do so love reading your codas. I want the show to hurry up and air the next ep, just I can read what you're gonna write next! ;-)

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stellarmeadow February 17 2014, 05:34:55 UTC
Hee! I want the show to hurry up and air all the eps so I know what I'm going to write... :)

Thank you so much!! :)

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