Title: Way Through It All
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stellaluna_Fandom: CSI:NY
Rating: NC-17 for explicit sex and language
Summary: Stella needs. Set sometime after "The Thing About Heroes." Stella/Mac
Disclaimer: None of these are mine. Characters are the property of Anthony Zuiker, Jerry Bruckheimer Television, CBS, and Alliance Atlantis.
Notes: Spoilers through "The Thing
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...hang on, I need a moment.
It's hot and intense, and I *love* the way you write their relationship. The way the tension breaks afterward is pitch perfect, and the last line is a killer.
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I really love their relationship, and I wanted to try and capture it here as best I could. Actually, if this turns out the way I want it to, the entire series should be *all* about the things I love about their relationship. Which. Gah. I have to do some serious thinky-work this weekend.
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You totally know that, although Stella is into it at the moment, there's another level on which she's not taking commanding!Mac seriously AT ALL.
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I love how you write Mac and Stella's friendship and relationship. The way you evoke so much of how they feel about each other and how much they need each other.
"You know I'm going to return the favor," she says.
"I hope so," he says.
"You don't need to worry about that." She kisses him and he kisses her back, then reaches to turn out the light. Stella rests her head on his chest and listens as his breathing deepens, and she smiles to herself in the dark.
She wants to see him break; he needs it as much as she does.
Oh yes please ..I look forward to seeing what you come up with for that....*g*
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Is good, the whole push-pull back forth thing with them. It has great twists where you know there's going to be certain things, but not necessarily the particular action. Like how she pokes on purpose, pusing him to see what he he'll do if she doesn't exactly what he wanted.
And the mix of Mac speaking softly and being so rough and almost maniaical is really rather hot. (ok, so rough mac in general is pretty hot.) Especially with him making little noises and letting go.
moar. nao.
and the thing I said about things feeling right? Feels even more now.
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I think Stella is definitely the perfect person for Mac to be having this particular, um, set of experiences with, since she *is* so willing to poke him and push and see what will happen, and in general shake him up enough so that he can move out of his comfort zone.
Moar soon. I hope. :-)
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