Comments | stellaluna_: Fic: And When We Fell Together (for <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/stagesoflove">stagesoflove</a></strong>)

stellaluna_

Fic: And When We Fell Together (for stagesoflove)

Jun 24, 2007 11:58

Title: And When We Fell Together
Author: stellaluna_
Fandom: CSI:NY
Rating: NC-17 for explicit sex
Summary: Mac has memorized the vulnerable places on their bodies. Post-S2. Danny/Mac/Stella. This is set in the same continuity as the original D/M/S series I did for the last round of stagesoflove, though you don't have to read that to follow this.
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danny/mac/stella, nc-17, fic, stages of love, csi:ny

Comments 20

snufflesdbear June 24 2007, 20:46:31 UTC

Is WOAH good enough comment? *SIGH* You have such a way with words, and know how to make sex and emotional plottiness work. Managing to keep the characters *in* charater at the same time.

*'nother happy sigh* *licks your ankle* (Allie Gator is in an Ankle-licking phase)

stellaluna_ July 1 2007, 02:14:15 UTC

Thank you! Very glad you enjoyed this. Keeping the characters in character is very important to me, especially during sex scenes -- I like to use the porn to advance plot/relationships or character in some way, and especially in a complicated relationship like this one, I want to be able to delve into all the complexities of what's going on.

mybestexcuse June 24 2007, 22:00:45 UTC

Oh, Stell. Yet again.

Are my comments even worth anything anymore? They just repeat whatever the last one said.

Interesting to see the drowning imagery pop up.

stellaluna_ June 30 2007, 18:13:03 UTC

Of course your comments are worth something! I always like seeing what you think about a piece of fic I've posted -- even if you feel like you're just repeating things, I don't.

And yeah, the drowning imagery struck me, too. I know I come back to the water themes again and again, but it seems particularly significant in this piece.

galerandyaddict June 24 2007, 23:48:26 UTC

i cant say anything constructive just marvel at the beauty of this. theres not enough trio fic out there :(

stellaluna_ June 30 2007, 17:48:47 UTC

Thank you! Very glad you enjoyed it. And I agree; there's absolutely not enough trio fic around.

kendermouse June 25 2007, 04:34:56 UTC

beautiful, absolutely beautiful!

thank you SO much for sharing.

peace,
the kendermouse

stellaluna_ June 30 2007, 17:46:28 UTC

Thank you! I'm very glad you enjoyed it.

scarletts_awry June 25 2007, 04:57:10 UTC

Oh, and porn you did! Full-on threesome character porn, which is sexy and atmospheric and makes me say "Oh, Mac."

I do love the "drowning" hitches of breath and how it echoes in the pulse/blood imagery.

Stella looks up at them with half-lidded eyes, gasping, hips arching up off the mattress. Danny's hard-on is like steel against him, and he puts his free hand on Stella's thigh again. Beneath his palm, he thinks, that's the femoral artery.

A person can bleed out before you ever know it, there one minute and gone the next. Anyone can go away at any time, so quickly.

He shouldn't be thinking of these things now.

That is just brilliant and moves so smoothly.

stellaluna_ July 1 2007, 02:39:29 UTC

As I mentioned last night: *icon love*

I want to say "Oh, Mac" a lot, too. Or "Oh, honey." Which...actually, Mac triggers that reaction in me frequently. Go figure.

And you know my fixation on water imagery, but I really do like the way it works here, especially with the specifics of drowning, and now that you mention it, that also ties in nicely with the pulse and blood stuff -- the tides and rhythms of the body. Hmm.