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[steff3]

Title: Underneath

Fandom: Sherlock BBC

Pairing: John/Sherlock, John/OC

Warning: PG-13
Disclaimer: Not belonging to me in any shape or form

Description: A girl whose boyfriend came as one half of a crime-fighting duo discovers there are repercussions to dating Sherlock 's 'sidekick'. Or how Prudence Conway had flashbacks and came to a few realisations

Comments

[karadin]

You should put the link directly to the fic, and not to your personal journal. This reads as a beginning to a fic, so if you intend to create chapters, label as a first chapter.

A girl whose boyfriend came as part of a crime-fighting duo involving a testing Sherlock Holmes comes to a few home truths…

Do you mean to say, a girl whose boyfriend became part of a crime fighting duo? The rest of your header 'involving a testing' does not come across clearly.

Make sure you run your fic by a beta reader before you post to a community to check for errors, often people have an impression of your fic according to how you present it, and might not read your work again if they find it is incomplete, or not coherent.

[steff3]

Thanks for the tips!

[errantcomment]

This shows *a lot* of promise!
Really.
I would suggest you take the advice of my esteemed collegue above, however.
Good luck, it'll be interesting to see how you develop. ^^