Comments | steel_corpses: Static.

steel_corpses

Static.

Jun 18, 2007 00:27

Patrick/Pete; 482 words; PG.
for prompt mar 31 07 at we_are_cities.

( When you show up at my door, you're dripping with rain, which is funny because I hadn't even heard the sound of it falling, too preoccupied with the butterflies in my stomach fighting to break free and fly away. )

static, we_are_cities, patrick/pete, mar 31 07, fall out boy

Comments 10

fobxfaerie July 3 2007, 03:15:03 UTC

awww!
I don't know what else to say :)

steel_corpses July 3 2007, 04:10:23 UTC

Thank you! :]

kittygrenade July 3 2007, 04:00:51 UTC

This was beautiful, please continue!!! =^-^=

steel_corpses July 3 2007, 04:11:07 UTC

Thank you! I'll try writing more and see how it turns out. :]

ellyjelly July 3 2007, 04:24:58 UTC

and did we always fit together this perfectly?
Like puzzle pieces, Patrick. Jigsaws.

This is really cute, I love how you've done it in Patrick's point of view, but made the feelings so ... real? I love the butterfly bit, too

steel_corpses July 3 2007, 04:37:53 UTC

Thank you. ♥

factory_dream July 3 2007, 21:28:21 UTC

aww. that was cute, in a bittersweet sort of way.

steel_corpses July 4 2007, 20:03:03 UTC

Thank you! :]

snowacid July 6 2007, 11:27:51 UTC

Cute & heartbreaking. I like this lots & lots. ♥
Please continue? :]

steel_corpses July 7 2007, 00:05:54 UTC

Thank you! I will try to continue and see how it works out. ♥