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steampunkcandy

Guerras Perdidas_El Final, THE END!

Mar 24, 2010 22:50

"The greatest thing since bread came sliced ..." ~ REM

( I think I started this story back in October but I don't remember. It's bad in places and weird in others and I know I cursed waaaaaaaaaay too much in a couple of spots LOL but whatever, it's a first draft I will edit it later. Yay, I'm just happy it's done I've had the ending for years too bad it's massive fail but whatever ... onto the next story.... )

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alyssa_hilary March 25 2010, 08:31:19 UTC

You read my letter. Now combine your stories into read mode for me (1,2,3) so I can read the whole stories and mail them to me. haha.

steampunkcandy March 26 2010, 05:27:43 UTC

You act like I've got a lot of stories finished. I only just finished Guerras Perdidas and it isn't that good ... it's a first draft *blushes* I'm going to leave it alone for a few months and then edit it.

On Arcaninegrowlit I started a bunch of stories but ... I kind of left them alone. I haven't been there in forever. But if there's one you like I'll send you what I got. Lemme know.

alyssa_hilary March 26 2010, 05:51:08 UTC

I liked all of them, but I got confused. I was like, huh?

anonymous May 1 2011, 06:14:06 UTC

I don't know if I can say this without taking all the space provided. I think it's great the story ended with Samantha not being lonely clear up to the point of her death. She needed her mom to face the reality of her death so she could finally except it herself. She wasn't in denial, she just couldn't be alone with the whole thing of dying. Since Samantha and her mom talked then even dad felt the change in the home. It wasn't any longer the house they all lived in, it was home. I think you did a great job. --- Conners

steampunkcandy August 3 2011, 20:40:04 UTC

I don't think that was my original intent at all Conners, LOL but it doesn't matter. As I remember one of my teachers in Uni once telling me ... sometimes even the writer's don't know what they're talking about hence ... you know, critical review. :) You're too sweet. Do you by any chance edit? I'm going to need betas ...