Primeval fic: Who they see

Aug 11, 2015 22:44


Title: Who they see

Word count: 100

Author: Stealingpennies

Characters: Lester

Rating: U
Written for P100 challenge 431: Past challenges. No 1: Introductions. Also covers 40: Dialogue.

We don't see things as they are we see them as we are )

lester, primeval, adventures in cross-posting, drabble

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fififolle August 14 2015, 05:57:28 UTC
Aww, it all worked out in the end. He had some fight for it though! Our James has had quite a life. Nice one.

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stealingpennies August 17 2015, 14:42:41 UTC

The boy done good! :)

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lsellersfic August 15 2015, 20:53:48 UTC
Very clever! I like the way you get the story just through the dialogue snippets!

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stealingpennies August 17 2015, 13:56:26 UTC

Thanks!

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nietie August 16 2015, 10:50:44 UTC
That's a great concept of looking at a character.

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stealingpennies August 17 2015, 13:55:52 UTC

Thank you! :)

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eriah211 August 24 2015, 21:06:18 UTC
Great way of showing Lester's evolution, very clever and very sweet ending ^_^

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stealingpennies August 25 2015, 08:15:06 UTC

Thanks! Lester deserves his happy ending. :)

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cordeliadelayne August 28 2015, 16:35:53 UTC
Very nice.

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stealingpennies August 31 2015, 10:50:07 UTC

Thanks!

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