Primeval fic: Exception to the Rule (Lester/Ryan) 4/4

[stealingpennies]

Title: Exception to the rule
Author: Stealingpennies
Characters: Lester/Ryan, Helen, OC
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 5,100 (Total 13,850)

Summary: Lester looked across sharply. “Don’t for one minute think I approve of this. Helen Cutter is going to disappear permanently whether the ARC gets involved or not. The one thing I can do is to ensure that

Comments

[fififolle]

Of course Lester wanted to get his paws on Ryan!! This is so very squeeful :D NOM!! Sex on the job, boys? tut tut :D

[stealingpennies]

I rewrote a bit to (try and) make the sex a bit sexier even though they were very preoccupied. T'was actually sex before the job which, you know, is totally professional!

[fififolle]

I did wonder if there was more kissing and licking going on than I remembered first time around! And there was, LOL. But I was rather distracted myself... GUH!!!

[knitekat]

Took the boys long enough to pounce on each other. Yummy. *purrs*

[fredbassett]

The thought of Ryan with a Luger is insanely hot! *happy sigh* As is Lester with a Makarov. *g*

And they've finally got together, sort of!!! *salivates unbecomingly*

I;m sticking with the Bond analogy. This is definitely reading like a wonderful thriller, and I have read a lot of pro fic that utterly fails to measure up to this story. And I do read a fuck of a lot of pro fic!

[stealingpennies]

Thank you. I may have to print off this comment - largely because I've always been afraid of writing anything that requires plot. These days I'm more inclined to give it a go and not worry about fucking up. *g* I think we've all come across pro fic that we've looked at wondered what the commissioning editor was smoking that day.

[goldarrow]

wow, this is getting tense!
*trots off to read the next part*