Primeval fic: Dead lines/ Assumptions

[stealingpennies]

Title: Dead lines/ Assumptions
Word count: 100 x 2
Rating: gen, PG-15
Characters: Team, Connor/Lester
P100 challenge 312: Dead lines

AN: The second drabble is really just playing with tense and how other people might view a Connor/Lester relationship

DEAD LINES

Cutter’s office. Record your message after the beep.

This is Stephen Hart. I’m not

Comments

[lukadreaming]

These both work really well, but I'm very struck by the first one. It's spot-on, and a really imaginative use of the prompt.

[stealingpennies]

Thanks. It's a very sad little list when it's laid out like that. Primeval is very harsh on its characters.

[knitekat]

Both of them are great.

Eek for the first, hard hitting.

[stealingpennies]

Cheers! Yes, the first is a very sad little list.

[fredbassett]

I enjoyed both, but the first really is excellent! Really original idea, perfectly executed.

[stealingpennies]

Thank you! You know the various team members have all been in a bad enough place to phone those numbers at some point.

[cordeliadelayne]

Great use of the prompt on the first!

And aw, poor Connor for the second.

[stealingpennies]

Thanks. It's a sad little line-up. :(
*g* Poor Lester too!

[clea2011]

That first one is a really great idea for the prompt and works very well!

Ooops, poor old Connor in the second one! :)

[stealingpennies]

It's a sad little list laid out like that. :(
Also poor Lester!